CORRECTIONS TO BE MADE TO THE SLIDE CONTENT:\n\nCore Marketing Issues:\n1.  The Presentation Is Educational ??? Not Agitating Enough\nIt does not sufficiently amplify:\nFear of collapse\nEgo risk\nLoss of reputation\nFamily breakdown\nFounder irrelevance\nRegret\n\n\n\n2. Core Messaging Analysis:\nWhere It Weakens:\nNot enough real-life vivid examples\nNo strong case studies or breakdown stories\nNo quantified consequences\nNo visible ???cost of inaction??? math\n\n\nShe said: ???The cost of a broken structure is millions.???\nBut it doesn???t show it.\nHigh earners (our audience) respond to:\nConcrete loss scenarios\nSpecific failure patterns\nReal consequences\n\n3. Include missing psychological triggers\n- Social proofs (testimonials, case studies, before/after structures)\n- Urgency amplifications: A small 10% discount will not move high earners. They are moved by opportunity cost, cohort limits and strategic necessity.\n\n4. Work on the offer clarity: Rather than sell modules, sell transformation.\nHere is an example:\nInstead of:\n ???Weeks 1???2: Clarity & Conversion???\nSell:\n ???By Week 2, you will know exactly how much is enough and what percentage of your income builds assets automatically.???\n\n5. Strategic Marketing Improvements \nA. Add a Diagnostic Opening\nBefore Module 1, add a 5-question ???Wealth Fragility Test???\nExample:\nIf you step away for 6 months, what breaks?\nIf you die tomorrow, who decides what?\nHow many months could your family operate without you?\nAre your assets coordinated or scattered?\nDoes your spouse understand your structure?\nThis increases emotional engagement.\nB. Add a Collapse Story\nYou can add one anonymized founder case:\nExample structure:\n???A founder earning ???60M annually died unexpectedly.\n No governance.\n No holding structure.\n 3-year legal battle.\n Business revenue dropped 40%.\n Children no longer speak.???\nRealistic. Concrete. Uncomfortable.\nThis moves people.\nC. Strengthen the Call to Action\nInstead of:\n???Join the Wealth Accelerator Coaching Program???\nUse:\n???If you are serious about installing structure before crisis forces it??????\nLanguage should signal:\nSerious people only\nLimited capacity\nNot for everyone\nExclusivity converts high earners.\n\n6. Include a bio and brand positioning section  for Mrs. Abiola at the beginning.\nShe should be positioned as a Strategic wealth architect for African founders, and not just a structured wealth educator.\n@Asheoluwa Oke